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Holy! Great job for no pen tool.

Wow, hmm. First of all, when you paint on the shadows for wrinkles in clothes, they shouldn't be quite that dark when they're close to the light. You did a better job on the skirt than on the chest/shoulder area, but it's something to consider.

I personally love her hair, esp. for being painted on. You did a great job. The positioning of her arm is perfect, too(I know you used to have trouble with that before)

The three wings idea is interesting. Shading could be improved there (think of a lot of feathers. Like hair, but a little different.)

If the background is a night scene, prosonally I'd make it darker, especially around the corners to bring out your character more.
anyway, you did a great job teti <3 keep it up!
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:icontetiel:
I agree. I went a bit too far. I was trying so hard to follow your suggestions of not using pure white that I went too far! I was actually worried about the arm positioning but I'm glad you like it ^_^ Thank you <3

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